1. Posted: September 13, 2020In:

    A timid college student has his world turned upside when he learns that he is not entirely human and his father is a ex demon king.

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    "When he learns his father was an ex-demon king, an unsuspecting college student must..." (Then tell us what he must do)

    “When he learns his father was an ex-demon king, an unsuspecting college student must…” (Then tell us what he must do)

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2020In:

    After bring left for dead, an immortal fighter comes out of retirement starts a underground fighting promotion and goes after those who killed him with his fists.

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    As written the protagonist sounds like the bad guy. You might need to explain why even though he is immortal, he goes after unsuspecting women. Shouldn't he go after those who left him for dead instead?

    As written the protagonist sounds like the bad guy.

    You might need to explain why even though he is immortal, he goes after unsuspecting women. Shouldn’t he go after those who left him for dead instead?

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  3. Posted: September 10, 2020In:

    Three interwined stories between three young couples being on the run.

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    You can do better than this... do I even need to say why?

    You can do better than this… do I even need to say why?

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