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Posted: September 8, 2020In: Student Loglines

When medicine and science fail, and the only way to get humanity back on track is to rewind the clock, a group of historians and storytellers sit down to rewrite history

Added an answer on September 8, 2020 at 3:30 pm

I did not get the 'time travel' aspect from reading your logline. From the logline it seemed like they were just re-writing history books like the communist do. You might want to mention that they go back in time to change history. "He who controls the present controls the past, he who controls theRead more

I did not get the ‘time travel’ aspect from reading your logline.

From the logline it seemed like they were just re-writing history books like the communist do.
You might want to mention that they go back in time to change history.

“He who controls the present controls the past, he who controls the past controls the future.”

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Posted: September 6, 2020In: Fantasy

An exiled emperor joins a resistance group to find and restore the throne’s rightful heir – his long-lost son – from his tyrannical brother.

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Added an answer on September 7, 2020 at 8:06 pm

Most of the story points are here, I don't believe the logline needs any significant changes. From a story standpoint: I do wonder why the Emperor is not trying to get his throne back for himself? Instead, the lead is attempting to secure the throne for his "Long-lost son" Normally people in power dRead more

Most of the story points are here, I don’t believe the logline needs any significant changes.

From a story standpoint:

I do wonder why the Emperor is not trying to get his throne back for himself? Instead, the lead is attempting to secure the throne for his “Long-lost son”

Normally people in power do not want to give up power. Wouldn’t the exiled emperor be the rightful ruler? Why secure the throne for a person he seems to not even know?

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