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  1. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Drama

    A young woman wakes up at the ‘After Life’ headquarters, only to discover that her premature death was caused by a glitch in the system. She must now convince The Boss to give her a second chance at life.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 7:06 pm

    "When she dies because of a glitch in the system, at the moment the love of her life is about to propose, a former wallflower will stop at nothing to convince the boss man to send her back and give her a second chance at life."

    “When she dies because of a glitch in the system, at the moment the love of her life is about to propose, a former wallflower will stop at nothing to convince the boss man to send her back and give her a second chance at life.”

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Drama

    A young woman wakes up at the ‘After Life’ headquarters, only to discover that her premature death was caused by a glitch in the system. She must now convince The Boss to give her a second chance at life.

    Richiev Singularity
    Replied to answer on September 9, 2020 at 6:59 pm

    To answer dpg, how about this concept: This should be a love story, The lead is to be completely in love, but instead of getting a chance to fulfill that love, she dies because of the glitch. Now the lead needs more than anything to go back to earth and see what might have been. Perhaps she dies rigRead more

    To answer dpg, how about this concept:

    This should be a love story, The lead is to be completely in love, but instead of getting a chance to fulfill that love, she dies because of the glitch.

    Now the lead needs more than anything to go back to earth and see what might have been.

    Perhaps she dies right before the first kiss. or even up the ante.

    How about this for a death.

    “Even though you have only been in my life a short time, it seems as though you have always been in my heart, I can’t imagine living my life without you, that’s why I wanted to ask you…” She dies.

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Drama

    When a now famous singer returns to his hometown after years, an old estranged friend and former band mate, now unsuccessful has to re-create an old gig of their band to get in contact with his friend again.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 8, 2020 at 3:33 pm

    I like the premise. The logline needs to tighten up a bit. But it isn't that far off.

    I like the premise.

    The logline needs to tighten up a bit. But it isn’t that far off.

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