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A high school freshman under the pressure of taking his father's place as pastor tries to turn his badly influenced school around. Challenged by a misunderstood gang member he strives to show him the importance of giving the lord a chance.
I meant 'deadline' not 'deadly'
I meant ‘deadline’ not ‘deadly’
See lessA high school freshman under the pressure of taking his father's place as pastor tries to turn his badly influenced school around. Challenged by a misunderstood gang member he strives to show him the importance of giving the lord a chance.
Your logline is way too wordy. You should cut it in half and then work with either the first half or the second. I would go with the second half myself. "Challenged by a misunderstood gang member, a preachers son fights to show him the importance of giving the lord a chance before the Hood is forcedRead more
Your logline is way too wordy. You should cut it in half and then work with either the first half or the second. I would go with the second half myself.
“Challenged by a misunderstood gang member, a preachers son fights to show him the importance of giving the lord a chance before the Hood is forced prove his loyalty by killing an innocent.”
I took a little liberty with the story in order to give the pastor’s son a deadly. He must save the young gang member before…
Hope this helps, good luck with this
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The Story seems a bit odd, but from a logline standpoint all the elements are there as long as the captain is the lead character. (Which it appears to be from reading the longline)
The Story seems a bit odd, but from a logline standpoint all the elements are there as long as the captain is the lead character. (Which it appears to be from reading the longline)
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