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Expecting a big extortion payoff, an esteemed detective's last case forces him to protect his extortion partners and save his reputation.
He is saying the protagonist isn't likable, (or doesn't seem like it in the logline)
He is saying the protagonist isn’t likable, (or doesn’t seem like it in the logline)
See lessA modern day comedic love story where the immature, yet charming, Oscar Cohen struggles when he must decide between his relationship with his childhood friends, and pursuing the woman of his dreams.
If you want you could add a few specifics, an example would be: After meeting the woman of his dreams an MMO gamer incurs the wrath of his longtime friends after missing the big raid and now both sides demand he choose between them or lose both. Of course yours would be different but the theory woulRead more
If you want you could add a few specifics, an example would be:
After meeting the woman of his dreams an MMO gamer incurs the wrath of his longtime friends after missing the big raid and now both sides demand he choose between them or lose both.
Of course yours would be different but the theory would be to add a few tidbits to make the story stand out and give it a hook.
See lessA devoted wife suspecting infidelity poisons her children to hurt her husband and now she must right her wrong and conceal the truth when she later realizes her mistake.
I have to disagree with some of the comments, I believe this logline is better than previous attempts because the others were vague, you are finally getting into specifics. It still feels like it rambles a bit, If you could find a way to make it just a little tighter you should be there.
I have to disagree with some of the comments, I believe this logline is better than previous attempts because the others were vague, you are finally getting into specifics. It still feels like it rambles a bit, If you could find a way to make it just a little tighter you should be there.
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