1. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    A psychic who sees true love by touch must overcome her fear of being unlovable if she?s to find a soulmate of her own.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think you got it.

    I think you got it.

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  2. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.

    Richiev Singularity

    Barring a major change to your story, I think this is the logline. Let's see if anyone else agrees.

    Barring a major change to your story, I think this is the logline. Let’s see if anyone else agrees.

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  3. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers from bankrupting millions of Americans.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is very close. Small critique: I would try to end on the word 'Bankrupt' instead of 'Americans' also you used millions twice. However I would only make small changes at this point, This is a pretty good attempt.

    This is very close.

    Small critique: I would try to end on the word ‘Bankrupt’ instead of ‘Americans’ also you used millions twice.

    However I would only make small changes at this point, This is a pretty good attempt.

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