1. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    A psychic who sees true love by touch must overcome her fear of being unlovable if she?s to find her own true love.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is a much better logline. Very small critique: You used love twice and unlovable as well. If you could find a word to replace one of those loves it would be that much better.

    This is a much better logline.

    Very small critique: You used love twice and unlovable as well. If you could find a word to replace one of those loves it would be that much better.

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  2. Posted: January 1, 2013In:

    A corrupt heir to an oil dynasty, deviously plots to exploit the planet of its most hidden resources, while he runs from an infamous FBI agent who tries to expose him to the world.

    Richiev Singularity

    All the elements are here I wouldn't change this one too much. I would ask, how is he going to exploit the planet while he is on the run?

    All the elements are here I wouldn’t change this one too much.

    I would ask, how is he going to exploit the planet while he is on the run?

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  3. Posted: December 27, 2012In:

    A computer hacking team has found themselves in a race against time to erase their digital fingerprints after attracting the attention of the secret service.

    Richiev Singularity

    I like this logline better than the one at the top.

    I like this logline better than the one at the top.

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