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Losing their home and wearing out their welcome with friends, a married couple devise a plan to become temporary residents at a hotel
This is a good start but you might try a few changes. First, why must they devise a plan to become temporary residents at a hotel? Isn't that what Hotels are for? Who or what is standing in their way? What are the consequences of failure? Still, this attempt isn't that bad, a few clarifications andRead more
This is a good start but you might try a few changes.
First, why must they devise a plan to become temporary residents at a hotel? Isn’t that what Hotels are for?
Who or what is standing in their way?
What are the consequences of failure?
Still, this attempt isn’t that bad, a few clarifications and it should be there.
Good luck
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I would change this to present tense. Instead of "has found themselves," I would say, When they, "Find themselves"
I would change this to present tense. Instead of “has found themselves,” I would say, When they, “Find themselves”
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That is closer but if he has to convince himself she is the woman of his dreams she probably isn't, I would word that different.
That is closer but if he has to convince himself she is the woman of his dreams she probably isn’t, I would word that different.
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