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A devout basketball star's shot at reaching the ?Final Four? is sabotaged by his insidious mother when he discovers the untold truth about his fatherless past.
There is quite a bit of good in this: Protagonist: Basketball Star Goal: Final Four Antagonist: Mother However it's a bit clunky in the execution. How does he discover the untold truth about his fatherless past and how does that relate to his mothers sabotaging his chances at the final four? As writRead more
There is quite a bit of good in this:
Protagonist: Basketball Star
Goal: Final Four
Antagonist: Mother
However it’s a bit clunky in the execution.
How does he discover the untold truth about his fatherless past and how does that relate to his mothers sabotaging his chances at the final four?
As written it’s more confusing than intriguing..
If you can clear that up without being too wordy, the logline will be much improved.
Hope that helps.
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There is no conflict in that carllord. The logline needs to show what is standing in the way of Oscar's goal.
There is no conflict in that carllord. The logline needs to show what is standing in the way of Oscar’s goal.
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The friends are important if they are the ones trying to break up Oscar and the girl he meets. From the previous attempt at a logline that was my impression of the story. (Unless I just misinterpreted the logline)
The friends are important if they are the ones trying to break up Oscar and the girl he meets. From the previous attempt at a logline that was my impression of the story. (Unless I just misinterpreted the logline)
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