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  1. Posted: December 22, 2012In: Public

    Four over-educated slacker's from Seattle lose at life and love, until Oscar meets the woman of his dreams.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 22, 2012 at 9:42 am

    I think your previous attempt was a little closer, it showed what was standing in Oscar's way. Story is conflict and in the logline it is important to get across the main conflict.. Upon meeting the woman of his dreams a slacker must overcome (Whatever it is his friends are doing that is standing inRead more

    I think your previous attempt was a little closer, it showed what was standing in Oscar’s way. Story is conflict and in the logline it is important to get across the main conflict..

    Upon meeting the woman of his dreams a slacker must overcome (Whatever it is his friends are doing that is standing in the way of their relationship)

    Like the premise, good luck with this.

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  2. Posted: December 22, 2012In: Public

    Four over-educated slacker's from Seattle lose at life and love, until Oscar meets the woman of his dreams.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 22, 2012 at 9:28 am

    The End?

    The End?

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    A scarred American divorc? and a resolute Irish Banker who is terminally ill, race against time to rekindle their once vibrant romance before she dies.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 4:50 am

    Okay how about something like this: "After being diagnosed with cancer, a resolute Irish banker seeks out the love of her life only to discover he's scarred from a previous relationship and hesitant to fall in love again."

    Okay how about something like this:

    “After being diagnosed with cancer, a resolute Irish banker seeks out the love of her life only to discover he’s scarred from a previous relationship and hesitant to fall in love again.”

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