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  1. Posted: December 3, 2012In: Public

    A naive young intelligence analyst is sent undercover in a group of rogue CIA agents – but as he falls for the glamor of their high-octane lifestyle, he starts to question who the real bad guys are…

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 4, 2012 at 11:56 am

    This idea has promise but the logline needs a little work. You seem to be connecting two ideas that seem to correlate to one another. How does, falling for a high octane lifestyle make him believe that the CIA are the bad guys? I could see, if the organization he infiltrated gave him information aboRead more

    This idea has promise but the logline needs a little work. You seem to be connecting two ideas that seem to correlate to one another. How does, falling for a high octane lifestyle make him believe that the CIA are the bad guys?

    I could see, if the organization he infiltrated gave him information about his CIA boss, it could make him question who the real bad guys are.

    I could see how falling for the high octane lifestyle could make his life spin out of control, (Like in Point Break)

    But I don’t see how falling for a high octane lifestyle could make him question who the real bad guys are?

    That part of the logline is a little fuzzy and could use a little work. But overall I like this premise.

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  2. Posted: November 25, 2012In: Public

    When the comet that was supposed to destroy the earth doesn't, a group of people must come to terms with the things they did when they thought the world was going to end.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 3, 2012 at 11:13 am

    Thanks for the reply, I do think I need to narrow it down to one character in the logline even if it about several characters.

    Thanks for the reply, I do think I need to narrow it down to one character in the logline even if it about several characters.

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  3. Posted: November 29, 2012In: Public

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 10:53 am

    Yeah, but like I said it might just be me: When a kung-fu gang cripples a famous Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe"

    Yeah, but like I said it might just be me:

    When a kung-fu gang cripples a famous Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe”

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