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When a group of Indigenous people is abducted by aliens, Warrun leads a breathtaking escape from their Earth-orbiting spaceship, only to learn the shattering truth of their origins.
You are nudging the audience and saying. "Look, something is about to happen." that isn't good. Don't tell us the conclusion of the movie. Tell us what leads up to the conclusion.
You are nudging the audience and saying. “Look, something is about to happen.” that isn’t good. Don’t tell us the conclusion of the movie. Tell us what leads up to the conclusion.
See lessA BIOLOGICAL WEAPON MANUFACTURING COMPANY WHICH DISGUISE AS A PHARMACTICAL COMPANY TEST THEIR WORKS ON PEOPLE WITH DISASTEROUS EFFECT.
How about this: When a new designer drug appears on the street, a veteran cop must battle a deceptive pharmaceutical company before his entire community becomes addicted." You don't have to use the word " addicted" if that isn't correct. For instance you could say... "before his entire community isRead more
How about this:
When a new designer drug appears on the street, a veteran cop must battle a deceptive pharmaceutical company before his entire community becomes addicted.”
You don’t have to use the word ” addicted” if that isn’t correct. For instance you could say… “before his entire community is turned into zombies” or whatever bad thing the drug does to change the people who take it.
See lessA BIOLOGICAL WEAPON MANUFACTURING COMPANY WHICH DISGUISE AS A PHARMACTICAL COMPANY TEST THEIR WORKS ON PEOPLE WITH DISASTEROUS EFFECT.
I agree with vivek, the way you wrote the logline it sounds as if the Biological Weapon Manufacturing Company is the lead character. Also, the way it's written, it doesn't distinguish itself from the Resident Evil movies. You should add something in the logline that gives it unique hook.
I agree with vivek, the way you wrote the logline it sounds as if the Biological Weapon Manufacturing Company is the lead character.
Also, the way it’s written, it doesn’t distinguish itself from the Resident Evil movies. You should add something in the logline that gives it unique hook.
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