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A student fed up with life uses his student loans to go on a cross-country trip to a video game tournament, meeting his teammates along the way.
"After going through rough times" is a bit bland. What bad things happen and who or what did them to Peter? "He realize that he does belong to the streets" This is not really plot, it is the conclusion. Plot is what he does to get to the conclusion. "Peter leaves home to experience the life going inRead more
“After going through rough times” is a bit bland. What bad things happen and who or what did them to Peter?
“He realize that he does belong to the streets” This is not really plot, it is the conclusion. Plot is what he does to get to the conclusion.
“Peter leaves home to experience the life going in the street” This is bland as well.
“After escaping his hum drum middle class existence a (insert adjective) man must (do this) to stop (this bad person or situation) from (doing this) in order to survive the mean streets,”
That was just an example; you really haven’t given us what the movie is about. So it’s difficult to give a good example of what your logline should be.
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This logline breaks some of the rules, however it isn't that bad. I like the premise of the story and get a good idea of what the story is about from what you have written. I would probably change, "One of his interviewees" to "His subject" because it is shorter. Also, I would read a few loglines asRead more
This logline breaks some of the rules, however it isn’t that bad. I like the premise of the story and get a good idea of what the story is about from what you have written. I would probably change, “One of his interviewees” to “His subject” because it is shorter. Also, I would read a few loglines as well as the advice they get, then maybe tweak this one just a little.
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I understand but you haven't given us an "Or" They must escape "OR" this bad thing will happen. Will they be used for experiments? Will they will be used as slave labor? Will they be butt probed? What will happen if they don't escape?
I understand but you haven’t given us an “Or”
They must escape “OR” this bad thing will happen. Will they be used for experiments? Will they will be used as slave labor? Will they be butt probed?
What will happen if they don’t escape?
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