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When a group of Indigenous people is abducted by aliens, Warrun leads a breathtaking escape from their Earth-orbiting spaceship, only to learn the shattering truth of their origins.
One more thing: "only to learn the shattering truth of their origins. " This sounds like a big reveal, I wouldn't put that in the logline. Just like I wouldn't put "Only to discover he was a ghost all along" in certain famous movies logline. Don't foreshadow the big reveal.
One more thing:
“only to learn the shattering truth of their origins. ”
This sounds like a big reveal, I wouldn’t put that in the logline. Just like I wouldn’t put “Only to discover he was a ghost all along” in certain famous movies logline.
Don’t foreshadow the big reveal.
See lessPeter leaves home to experience the life going in the street.After going through rough times,he realize that he does belong to the street.
After going through rough times? is a bit bland. What bad things happen and who or what did them to Peter? He realize that he does belong to the streets? This is not really plot, it is the conclusion. Plot is what he does to get to the conclusion. Peter leaves home to experience the life going in thRead more
After going through rough times? is a bit bland. What bad things happen and who or what did them to Peter?
He realize that he does belong to the streets? This is not really plot, it is the conclusion. Plot is what he does to get to the conclusion.
Peter leaves home to experience the life going in the street? This is bland as well.
After escaping his hum drum middle class existence a (insert adjective) man must (do this) to stop (this bad person or situation) from (doing this) in order to survive the mean streets,?
That was just an example; you really haven?t given us what the movie is about. So it?s difficult to give a good example of what your logline should be.
See lessA student fed up with life uses his student loans to go on a cross-country trip to a video game tournament, meeting his teammates along the way.
Sorry this was for the other logline
Sorry this was for the other logline
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