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A haughty Elvin princess with no love for humans, must leave her beloved sheltering woods, to find her brother before their father passes.
The story is about Elysia, the young princess, starting off with a black and white view of the world and by the end of her journey realizing there are shades of grey.
The story is about Elysia, the young princess, starting off with a black and white view of the world and by the end of her journey realizing there are shades of grey.
See lessA haughty Elvin princess with no love for humans, must leave her beloved sheltering woods, to find her brother before their father passes.
This second attempt should be more clear as to who's the lead character. (I might rethink the comma after woods)
This second attempt should be more clear as to who’s the lead character. (I might rethink the comma after woods)
See lessWhen the king of the elves decides it's time to BECOME, it's up to a haughty Elvin princess to leave the Green Sea and enter the world of the Human "Barbarians" to find her brother, so he can take the throne.
This is sort of Saving private Ryan meets Lord of the Rings. The story is the journey; to find the brother and bring him home. Along the way she is fighting her own prejudices about humans. Thus through the journey she comes of age from being sheltered to getting a real understanding of the world. -Read more
This is sort of Saving private Ryan meets Lord of the Rings. The story is the journey; to find the brother and bring him home. Along the way she is fighting her own prejudices about humans. Thus through the journey she comes of age from being sheltered to getting a real understanding of the world.
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Having a consequence in not finding the brother could add some conflict. Good point.