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  1. Posted: August 29, 2020In: Comedy

    A christian struggles with his fate when his new neighbours are satanists, this is how he discovers he is actually the devil himself. “668 the neighbour of the beast”

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 29, 2020 at 6:39 pm

    Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast. However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself. Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast? Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters? This sRead more

    Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast.
    However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself.
    Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast?
    Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters?

    This seems a little confusing as written.

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2020In: Drama

    A high school student becomes an unwitting pawn in a game between two teachers, and she must find a way to outwit them in order for her to get accepted to university.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 29, 2020 at 4:56 pm

    I have to agree with mrliteral, if someone is unwitting, then they don't know. So the lead doesn't know she is a pawn. I would just drop the word altogether in the logline, I don't think it helps the logline and it reads fine without that word.

    I have to agree with mrliteral, if someone is unwitting, then they don’t know. So the lead doesn’t know she is a pawn. I would just drop the word altogether in the logline, I don’t think it helps the logline and it reads fine without that word.

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2020In: Action

    After facing corruption in the porn industry, a film director and an aging actress teams up and kills those who is about to release their sex tape.

    Richiev Singularity
    Replied to answer on August 28, 2020 at 3:05 pm

    Perhaps the parishioner is blackmailing the lead character. She (or he) Tells the preacher the sex tape will be released if he doesn't give up a very large sum of money. (One Miiiiilion dollars) The wife is all smiles and smooth talk on the set (A fictional version of TBN) but the moment the camerasRead more

    Perhaps the parishioner is blackmailing the lead character. She (or he) Tells the preacher the sex tape will be released if he doesn’t give up a very large sum of money. (One Miiiiilion dollars)

    The wife is all smiles and smooth talk on the set (A fictional version of TBN) but the moment the cameras stop rolling she is just mean to everyone including her husband and there is no way she is gonna let some hussy destroy their lives.

    So she tells her husband in no uncertain terms to take care of it, and ask forgiveness later!

    This leads the preacher down a dark path of blackmail, mobsters, and money.

    The Twist: Perhaps the preachers ruthless wife was behind the blackmail the entire time.

    At the end of the story, after he is caught trying or succeeding to kill the blackmailer. She comes out on camera crying and acting the victim, the movie ends with her in one-hundred percent control of the televangelism program and all the followers who watch the show feeling sorry for her. Donations go through the roof.

    (She would not have gotten anything in a divorce because of a prenuptial agreement now she has everything)

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