Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Two incompetent, drunken corporate video producers toil aimlessly at the bottom of a barrel no-one wants to scrape and, as they owe money to a sadistic, Ealing comedy-loving, international crime boss, they have to take increasingly frantic measures to save their lives and reproductive organs.
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success? Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conRead more
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success?
Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conflict) you should indicate that in the logline.
See lessThe Man Who Invented Scalper Bots Changes Into the Master of the Fan Jedi Order.
In a story, you have; 1: A lead character 2: Who has a goal 3: And something stands in the way of that goal. You have a lead character, But you don't have the other two elements in your logline. The goal of the lead character should be their driving force. The goal should mean the entire world to thRead more
In a story, you have;
1: A lead character
2: Who has a goal
3: And something stands in the way of that goal.
You have a lead character,
But you don’t have the other two elements in your logline.
The goal of the lead character should be their driving force. The goal should mean the entire world to that lead character.
I have no idea what your lead character wants,
I have no idea what is standing in your lead characters way
In order to make this logline more compelling you should add those two elements to the logline.
See lessA college student’s life on the line when he receives mysterious phone call from a stranger who invades his home and kidnaps his family.
You seem to have three things that set this story in motion, 1: He receives a mysterious phone call from a stranger, 2: his home is invaded, 3: His family is kidnapped. You should pick one, then tell us what he must do about it.
You seem to have three things that set this story in motion,
1: He receives a mysterious phone call from a stranger,
2: his home is invaded,
3: His family is kidnapped.
You should pick one, then tell us what he must do about it.
See less