1. Posted: March 22, 2020In:

    An old and worthless dog must find a forever home before it’s too late.

    Richiev Singularity

    I agree with Keymiser, what sets this story in motion and what are the stakes?

    I agree with Keymiser, what sets this story in motion and what are the stakes?

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2020In:

    A former child actor’s life has turned upside down when he mentors a teenage boy who looks like him during his younger days.

    Richiev Singularity

    Do drug dealers actually mentor people? I would see how a former drug dealer might, but I would think it odd that a drug dealer would become a mentor.

    Do drug dealers actually mentor people?

    I would see how a former drug dealer might, but I would think it odd that a drug dealer would become a mentor.

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  3. Posted: March 21, 2020In:

    A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.

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    Richiev Singularity

    One more thing, Story is conflict, without conflict, there is no story.?You say her husband is excited for the lead character... if there is no conflict between the husband and the lead character, what is his purpose in moving the story forward?If the Husband is okay with the situation, why not haveRead more

    One more thing, Story is conflict, without conflict, there is no story.?

    You say her husband is excited for the lead character… if there is no conflict between the husband and the lead character, what is his purpose in moving the story forward?

    If the Husband is okay with the situation, why not have the lead character be single instead of married? Or replace the husband with a best friend character.

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