1. Posted: March 18, 2020In:

    Many believe the most dreaded words in a hospital are ‘Code Blue, they are wrong. Although serious, they are not even close to those that strike fear in the most hardened hospital administrator: “We are about to exceed ‘Surge Capacity'”.

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    Richiev Singularity

    Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?

    Who is the lead character?

    What is their goal?

    What is standing in their way?

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  2. Posted: March 19, 2020In:

    After killing the son of a biker, a fugitive decides to go the run with his estranged daughter.

    Richiev Singularity

    What is the lead character's goal? What sets that goal into motion?

    What is the lead character’s goal?

    What sets that goal into motion?

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2020In:

    When her baby sister is taken by a dark spirit, a Chippawa girl must go on a journey to find Asibikaashi, spider women to help save her sister.

    Richiev Singularity

    I am not sure about the very end of the logline, but overall it isn't bad. It gets the big story points across.

    I am not sure about the very end of the logline, but overall it isn’t bad. It gets the big story points across.

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