1. Posted: March 20, 2020In:

    When a high priced gigolo moonlights as a pornstar, his sexual depravities reach extreme heights, and he is forced to decide how much of his soul he will sell for money, fame and the love that will never fulfil him.

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    What sets the story in motion? You have a gigolo who sells sex for money- Life is normal (For the lead character) Then something happens that makes him question his life choices. What story event makes the lead character look inward?

    What sets the story in motion?

    You have a gigolo who sells sex for money- Life is normal (For the lead character)

    Then something happens that makes him question his life choices.

    What story event makes the lead character look inward?

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  2. Posted: March 21, 2020In:

    A married woman accidentally drinks a love potion and falls in love with a shy prince. Her open-hearted husband is excited for her, but the King isn’t.

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    Things are happening too the lead character, but you haven't told us what the lead character must do about it. Is she going to try to find an antidote for the love potions? Is she going to try to win the prince's heart? What is the lead character's goal?  

    Things are happening too the lead character, but you haven’t told us what the lead character must do about it.

    Is she going to try to find an antidote for the love potions?

    Is she going to try to win the prince’s heart?

    What is the lead character’s goal?

     

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2020In:

    After being hired by the CIA as a mercenary, a man teams up with four other mercenaries to stop drug lords from taking a plane hostage.

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    You can't really take a plane hostage... What or who is on the plane, that is valuable enough to take hostage... The president's daughter (For instance)

    You can’t really take a plane hostage… What or who is on the plane, that is valuable enough to take hostage… The president’s daughter (For instance)

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