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After rescuing a baby found outside of her family’s cabin,? an apathetic teen must shelter him from the approaching blizzard and fend off relentless attacks from his monstrous, “Parent,” until the storm passes.
I think all the elements are there, as for me personally, and in the case of this logline, I assume the things I don't know nor understand, (Like the monstrous parent) will be fully explained in the actual script.So if you make any changes, make sure they are more like tweaks than a major overhaul.
I think all the elements are there, as for me personally, and in the case of this logline, I assume the things I don’t know nor understand, (Like the monstrous parent) will be fully explained in the actual script.
So if you make any changes, make sure they are more like tweaks than a major overhaul.
See lessAfter acceptance into a new gene-altering program, a nerdy, popular eSports gamer undergoes a risky, unknown side-effects procedure to become a NFL quarterback hoping to win a Super Bowl.
I think this is interesting, however, what is standing in the way of the lead character succeeding? Where is the conflict?
I think this is interesting, however, what is standing in the way of the lead character succeeding? Where is the conflict?
See lessA husband begins an affair with his dream woman using lucid dreaming technology, but when this fantasy woman begins stalking his family in real life, he must protect them from a woman who shouldn?t exist.
This logline is a lot better than the first.I would change "A Husband" as your only description of the lead character. We know from the line "begins and affair" and that coupled with mentioning of his family he is married and is a family man, so I would try to use a couple of adjectives to help flesRead more
This logline is a lot better than the first.
I would change “A Husband” as your only description of the lead character. We know from the line “begins and affair” and that coupled with mentioning of his family he is married and is a family man, so I would try to use a couple of adjectives to help flesh out the character for the reader.
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