1. Posted: January 17, 2020In:

    When a disgraced bodyguard is hired to transport a smarmy hitman to the Hague, the two have one weekend to outsmart, outrun, outgun, or evade, every assassin in Europe, and that’s if the two doesn’t shoot each other first.

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    The Hitman's Bodyguard (2017)(Wasn't sure if I should add to the logline that the hitman is a witness, adding it made the logline kind of clunky but it is somewhat important storywise)

    The Hitman’s Bodyguard (2017)

    (Wasn’t sure if I should add to the logline that the hitman is a witness, adding it made the logline kind of clunky but it is somewhat important storywise)

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  2. Posted: January 15, 2020In:

    After her father dies in a car accident, a bartender goes on a downward spiral when she struggles with addiction, she decides turn her life around when she becomes a street dancer with the help of a fellow dancer.

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    The term, "25-year-old young woman" is a bit clunky. (If you tell us she is 25 you don't need to further tell us she is young) Also "Moonlights herself" is also a little weird. Because... First: you can just say "Moonlights as a dancer" Second: We don't know what the lead character's day job is, itRead more

    The term, “25-year-old young woman” is a bit clunky. (If you tell us she is 25 you don’t need to further tell us she is young)

    Also “Moonlights herself” is also a little weird. Because…

    First: you can just say “Moonlights as a dancer”

    Second: We don’t know what the lead character’s day job is, it doesn’t matter if she is moonlighting, unless there is a conflict between the day job and the dance gig.

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  3. Posted: January 17, 2020In:

    After a childhood and adolescence of abuse by her father and stepfather, an adult woman must figure out the pieces of her trauma and how to overcome it.

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    What sets the lead character down her path?For instance: Does she meet 'the perfect man' only to realize she'll never be able to truly fall in love until she faces her past?Also, is this just about a woman in therapy? Or does she confront her father about the terrible things he did in an effort to gRead more

    What sets the lead character down her path?

    For instance: Does she meet ‘the perfect man’ only to realize she’ll never be able to truly fall in love until she faces her past?

    Also, is this just about a woman in therapy? Or does she confront her father about the terrible things he did in an effort to get closure?

    In other words, how does she figure out the pieces?

    Because how she gets closure is what the story will be about.

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