Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
On a quiet morning, a reformed and long-retired heavy-equipment repo man is visited by a former friend and associate to answer for a violent incident that happened decades ago.
What is the main story, The talk between the old associate and the main character, or is it the events of the past, told using their conversation as a tool to transport the reader into the past and watch as that story takes place?
What is the main story, The talk between the old associate and the main character, or is it the events of the past, told using their conversation as a tool to transport the reader into the past and watch as that story takes place?
See lessRosy is a 9 year old school girl with a sideline in selling slime to her classmates. When a magical ingredient gives her amazing powers, she sees a chance to inspire real change in the world. But not before she’s saved a young boy who’s lost all hope, a boy with destructive powers of his own.
"When she saves a boy with destructive powers, an elementary student must use her own powers in order to..." (Then tell us what she must do)
“When she saves a boy with destructive powers, an elementary student must use her own powers in order to…” (Then tell us what she must do)
See lessAfter being beating up because of his lack of social skills, a college student with Asperger’s syndrome decides to shoot his classmates and professor.
I have to agree, some specifics would be helpful to flesh this logline out. First: How is the lead bullied? Is he given a wedgie? Beaten up? Did he have his clothes stolen while taking a shower at gym class? What is the specific event that sets off the lead character? Second: And the term, revenge iRead more
I have to agree, some specifics would be helpful to flesh this logline out.
First: How is the lead bullied? Is he given a wedgie? Beaten up? Did he have his clothes stolen while taking a shower at gym class? What is the specific event that sets off the lead character?
Second: And the term, revenge is vague as well. Does he put laxatives in the school lunch? Does he hack the school computer and give them all F’s, Does he burn down the school?
In other words, depending on the type of revenge, (Funny, mean, poetic justice etc.)? this could be “Revenge of the Nerds” or it could be “The Basketball Diaries” And that is a pretty big swing of styles.
See less