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  1. Posted: January 10, 2020In: SciFi

    During a near-future nuclear war, when an A-bomb forces her into a public bunker, an optimistic head-nurse and mother takes charge of the eclectic group of strangers to ensure they survive the mandatory month-long confinement

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    Added an answer on January 11, 2020 at 12:03 am

    Futuristic means like the future but happens today  

    Futuristic means like the future but happens today

     

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  2. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Drama

    After the die-hard romantic paramour of a married woman is asked to help kill her abusive stepfather, he plans the perfect murder but when he discovers she is using him as a pawn, heartbroken, he plots his revenge.

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    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 10:41 am

    The twist should not be about "Plotting"Instead, it should happen quickly, and as a big reveal.The very trap that was supposed to "get" the husband is expertly turned around on the vengeful wife when it's revealed Her Paramour and Her husband are lovers.(Or the other way around. The husband convinciRead more

    The twist should not be about “Plotting”

    Instead, it should happen quickly, and as a big reveal.

    The very trap that was supposed to “get” the husband is expertly turned around on the vengeful wife when it’s revealed Her Paramour and Her husband are lovers.

    (Or the other way around. The husband convincing his lover to kill his wife only to be double-crossed by the lover and his wife at the end)

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  3. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Thriller

    After an immodest teenager gets jilted at the school dance by her boyfriend and then loses the homecoming competition, she stumbles upon family secrets of lies and an unsolved murder mystery that turns her life upside down.

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    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 10:29 am

    The setup and the goal should match.Your logline starts with one setup: The lead gets jilted (Which would imply being jilted is what the story is about)Then changes to family secrets.If the goal of the lead character is to solve the family secret. Then what sets the story in motion is when the leadRead more

    The setup and the goal should match.

    Your logline starts with one setup: The lead gets jilted (Which would imply being jilted is what the story is about)

    Then changes to family secrets.

    If the goal of the lead character is to solve the family secret. Then what sets the story in motion is when the lead discovers the family has a secret.

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