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  1. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Comedy

    A pair of young lovers from rival lobster fishing gangs in Maine must unite their communities in order to defend their territories against the encroaching Canadian lobster mafia.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 10:25 am

    Pretty solid and gets the story across. If you change anything, don't change much.

    Pretty solid and gets the story across. If you change anything, don’t change much.

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  2. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Horror

    Introverted twins move to a new town where they endure (racially motivated) harassment; one finally decided to fight back.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 10:22 am

    You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.It doesn't mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.

    You should give a face to the bad guy. A specific bad guy that is a focal point for the reader.

    It doesn’t mean this character is the only one harassing the twins, it just means he is the lead instigator or main Harasser.

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  3. Posted: January 2, 2020In: Comedy

    A cynical journalist tasked with writing a slam piece on 80?s cover bands struggles with her objectivity when she falls for the charismatic lead singer of an all-female cover band as she accompanies them during a contest to win the opening spot for a major rock band.

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    Added an answer on January 3, 2020 at 8:20 pm

    What are the stakes if the lead character fails? Why Must the lead write the "Slam" piece??(I only say this because, writing a "Slam" piece before she has even interviewed the band isn't very objected. It's the exact opposite of objective. So there must be a different reason (other than objectivity)Read more

    What are the stakes if the lead character fails? Why Must the lead write the “Slam” piece?

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    (I only say this because, writing a “Slam” piece before she has even interviewed the band isn’t very objected. It’s the exact opposite of objective. So there must be a different reason (other than objectivity) Why she must write the slam piece.)

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