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An ambitious young actor begins a passionate love affair with a washed-up but wealthy older actress, however, her family suspect he’s a gold-digger and set out to undermine his career.
Who is the lead character, The young actor? The Older Actor? Or the suspicious family member? Who's point of view are we seeing this story from?
Who is the lead character, The young actor? The Older Actor? Or the suspicious family member? Who’s point of view are we seeing this story from?
See lessWhen a high school reunion brings together a group of female friends, they use the night to complete their unfinished and outdated high school bucket list before they part ways again.
To Take dpg's idea as a baseline:-----"When her best friend from highschool reveals she has cancer, a wild child turned respectable mom uses the 25th highschool reunion to reunite the old gang and help their dying friend complete her highschool bucket list."-----Of course, your logline would be diffRead more
To Take dpg’s idea as a baseline:
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“When her best friend from highschool reveals she has cancer, a wild child turned respectable mom uses the 25th highschool reunion to reunite the old gang and help their dying friend complete her highschool bucket list.”
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Of course, your logline would be different, but this logline example uses dpg’s critique, and adds and inciting incident (The ‘why now’ of the story) gives a time frame and adds a serious undertone to the possible comedic premise.
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TP an old rival’s house.
Smoke a joint on the roof
Streak through the school
Kiss the guy she never had the courage to kiss
Tell off the mean vice principal
Go to prom
(in fact, a very good scene could be when the friends recreate the prom their dying friend missed and surprise her; not only with the dance, but have her old flame in a tux as her prom date)
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See lessWhen a teenager discovers her identical twin, she convinces her to swap lives so she may discover the whereabouts of their missing father.
I think the concept interesting, but why can't the first twin hunt for her father without switching places? That obstacle is probably important to the logline
I think the concept interesting, but why can’t the first twin hunt for her father without switching places? That obstacle is probably important to the logline
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