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Bound by an inescapable sense to carry out his late master’s legacy, a masked hitman becomes a rising gangland player with the sole purpose of taking down the very criminal organization who employ him.
"Bound by an inescapable sense to carry out his late master's legacy..." An inner feeling does not make for a good inciting incident.--------------------------------------"When his master is murdered by the very organization he works for, a determined hitman will stop at nothing get revenge for hisRead more
“Bound by an inescapable sense to carry out his late master’s legacy…” An inner feeling does not make for a good inciting incident.
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“When his master is murdered by the very organization he works for, a determined hitman will stop at nothing get revenge for his master by taking down his backstabbing syndicate.”
Upside down in a binge, pacifist Hank Thompson loses a key that belongs to the Russian mob; now Hank must find the key or die trying.
If you are going to give your lead character the unusual trait of being a pacifist. You should show in the logline how the inciting puts him in a position where he must betray his beliefs... or else something bad will happen.
If you are going to give your lead character the unusual trait of being a pacifist. You should show in the logline how the inciting puts him in a position where he must betray his beliefs… or else something bad will happen.
See lessDuring an arrest on a train, the leader must lead his team through the full speed train filled with flesh eating demons to the engine car, where they must find a way to get off the train before it crashes.
The whole point of getting to the engine car was to stop the train."When the train's passengers turn into flesh-eating demons, an FBI agent must lead a rag-tag group of survivors to the engine room to stop the out of control locomotive and escape."
The whole point of getting to the engine car was to stop the train.
“When the train’s passengers turn into flesh-eating demons, an FBI agent must lead a rag-tag group of survivors to the engine room to stop the out of control locomotive and escape.”
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