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  1. Posted: March 31, 2019In: Thriller

    A young man?s life begins to unravel when he receives? a mysterious text from his dead girlfriend?s cell phone.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 31, 2019 at 6:21 pm

    "When he receives a mysterious text from his dead girlfriend's phone, a (Student?) must..." (Then tell us what he must do)

    “When he receives a mysterious text from his dead girlfriend’s phone, a (Student?) must…” (Then tell us what he must do)

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2019In: Superhero

    After getting injected with a rage serum, the injected man must use his new found abilities to stop a rich vengeful businessman from flooding the streets with his serum to destroy the city.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 31, 2019 at 1:38 pm

    This still doesn't address the main problem. Businessmen need law and order to sell their product. A destroyed city won't be good for business. Why would a businessman want to destroy a city?

    This still doesn’t address the main problem. Businessmen need law and order to sell their product. A destroyed city won’t be good for business.
    Why would a businessman want to destroy a city?

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2019In: Thriller

    TITLE: A Psycho In The Cockpit. LOGLINE: A psycho in the cockpit. STORY IS ABOUT: A Psycho in the cockpit.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 30, 2019 at 12:06 pm

    You say you 'Need NOT' mention the other characters, but that's not a logline. For instance, a blurb (In space no one can hear you scream) is not a logline.? Saying the film is 'Godzilla' meets 'Terms of endearment' is not a logline. It might be a pitch. When you are in a meeting and you say, SnakesRead more

    You say you ‘Need NOT’ mention the other characters, but that’s not a logline. For instance, a blurb (In space no one can hear you scream) is not a logline.? Saying the film is ‘Godzilla’ meets ‘Terms of endearment’ is not a logline.
    It might be a pitch. When you are in a meeting and you say, Snakes on a plane meets Psycho, that might go over well in the meeting.

    But for a logline you should at least tell us who the lead character is.
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    “When a psycho takes? control of the plane and kills the pilot, a gamer and a flight attendant must wrest control of the controls before the madman crashes the Seven thirty-seven into the white house.”

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