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TITLE: A Psycho In The Cockpit. LOGLINE: A psycho in the cockpit. STORY IS ABOUT: A Psycho in the cockpit.
Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
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What is standing in their way?
(REVISED) When his mother is inexplicably resurrected after her ?end-of-life? party, a Christian grief counselor convinces his family it?s a miracle by hiding the truth ? she?s returned with a growing bloodlust.
While this set-up is still interesting. The story is what they do about it.I still don't know who's the lead character, is it the grief counselor?
While this set-up is still interesting. The story is what they do about it.
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As dimensional portals bring refugees from an another earth, a disillusioned border agent encounters his alternate-earth daughter and becomes torn between following orders, or protecting an alternate world from annihilation.
I don't know if your story has been written yet, but if it hasn't this is how I would start the story.-----1: At the beginning of the story. Perhaps even during the opening credits, I would show scenes of the lead character and his daughter2: I would show birthday party's, take your daughter to workRead more
I don’t know if your story has been written yet, but if it hasn’t this is how I would start the story.
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1: At the beginning of the story. Perhaps even during the opening credits, I would show scenes of the lead character and his daughter
2: I would show birthday party’s, take your daughter to work day, the father putting a band-aid on a bruised knee. Maybe the two of them dancing to his daughter’s favorite song. (Sentimental memories) and these scenes should be emphasized with a filter that lets people know this is in the past. Kind of bright and slightly fuzzy
3: Then we see a newspaper clipping of “Young girl killed in freak accident)
4: Now we cut to the present and the father is going through the motions at work, he clearly hasn’t gotten over the death of his daughter. (In contrast, everything is kind of dark and colorless)?
5: The father is checking ids and visa’s at the interdimensional portal. Perhaps a quick conversation with a coworker to get a glimpse of the lead characters current state. He drinks too much, he is depressed and the coworker is worried.
6: Finally, within the first 10 minutes of the story, out steps his daughter from the portal.
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By setting up how much the lead loved his daughter and how devastating her death was to him, seeing his daughter walk out from the portal should have a huge emotional pull on the audience’s heartstrings.
And by doing so, the audience will go along with whatever crazy plan the lead comes up with in order to save his alternate-dimensional daughter.