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There needs to be more to this logline.A story begins when the lead character's life is turned upside down.As a result, your logline just describes the set-up, not the story."When she discovers her family's dark legacy of gaslighting, a confused ethics professor must..." (Then tell us what she mustRead more
There needs to be more to this logline.
A story begins when the lead character’s life is turned upside down.
As a result, your logline just describes the set-up, not the story.
“When she discovers her family’s dark legacy of gaslighting, a confused ethics professor must…” (Then tell us what she must do)
See lessWhen a young but tough stranger arrives in an isolated community, the naive queen must protect him from the suspicious villagers. But has she made the right decision?
Your logline seems to switch perspectives. It starts with the strangers PoV, then it switches to the queen PoV. It is better to have the same PoV throughout the logline.
Your logline seems to switch perspectives. It starts with the strangers PoV, then it switches to the queen PoV.
See lessIt is better to have the same PoV throughout the logline.
A World War II British Army nurse gives up non-combatant status to sabotage her German captors? ambush of a British patrol, which leads her towards overcoming fears, superstitions & desire for safety in her increasingly dangerous world.
"When she discovers a Nazi plot to ambush her brother's British unit, a captured nurse must..." (Then tell us specifically what she must do: Must she destroy a bridge? Must she seduce a Nazi officer? Must she poison the Nazi food? What must she do in order to successfully stop the attack on the patrRead more
“When she discovers a Nazi plot to ambush her brother’s British unit, a captured nurse must…” (Then tell us specifically what she must do: Must she destroy a bridge? Must she seduce a Nazi officer? Must she poison the Nazi food? What must she do in order to successfully stop the attack on the patrol?)
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