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: Six high school boys become competitors and then, enemies, when they get involved in the drug world, leading to a triple murder.
Six lead characters is a bit much, sometimes you can get away with two, but most the time there will be one main character even if the story follows several. (I can only think of Breakfast Club as a good example of multiple lead characters) Who is the lead character? Something happens to the lead chRead more
Six lead characters is a bit much, sometimes you can get away with two, but most the time there will be one main character even if the story follows several. (I can only think of Breakfast Club as a good example of multiple lead characters)
Who is the lead character? Something happens to the lead character which causes them to have a goal. Which of the six characters has the goal? Which one drives the story?
Telling this logline from the point of view of the lead character will help improve it greatly.
See lessWhat is the most important for you; to be free despite you may lose, or stay as a slave despite you may win? It?s your own choice not the cold wire
A philosophical question is not a story. Who is the lead character? What do they want? What's standing in their way?
A philosophical question is not a story.
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhat do they want?
What’s standing in their way?
Cursed to forever wander the earth by her ancient ancestors, a jobbing painter must seek a way to repaint the Cistine Chapel to reflect Gnostic Beliefs so that she may finally find eternal rest.
The logline is actually somewhat solid. I only question how ancient ancestors could curse anyone? They would have died hundreds, maybe thousands of years before she was born so how would they even know to curse the lead character. And why would they want to?
The logline is actually somewhat solid.
See lessI only question how ancient ancestors could curse anyone?
They would have died hundreds, maybe thousands of years before she was born so how would they even know to curse the lead character.
And why would they want to?