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  1. Posted: December 30, 2018In: Drama

    A young Broadway actress defies her family, their political stance, and puts at risk an already fragile relationship with her mother when she decides to reconnect with an estranged Communist aunt living in Cuba.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 31, 2018 at 11:23 am

    Why now? What happens that set's the story in motion?She could have reconnected last year, she could have reconnected next year. What happens that makes her take this course of action right now.

    Why now? What happens that set’s the story in motion?
    She could have reconnected last year, she could have reconnected next year. What happens that makes her take this course of action right now.

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2018In: Drama

    A Mexican immigrant kidnaps a newborn baby. During the cat-and-mouse chase, a racist detective, discovers the abduction isn’t what it seems.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 29, 2018 at 9:25 pm

    A logline should be told from the perspective of the lead character. In your logline you start from the perspective of Anna, then switch to the perspective of Detective Miller. Instead, since it seems that detective miller is the lead character, you should write the entire logline from his perspectiRead more

    A logline should be told from the perspective of the lead character.
    In your logline you start from the perspective of Anna, then switch to the perspective of Detective Miller.

    Instead, since it seems that detective miller is the lead character, you should write the entire logline from his perspective.

    (Also, you don’t need to add names of characters unless they are famous)

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2018In: Coming of Age

    After two girls fall in love in El Salvador, they try to make a future, even if it means crossing the dangerous border for the ‘land of the free.’

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 29, 2018 at 12:31 pm

    If your script has an antagonist. Someone who persecutes the couple for being gay, it should be added to the script. It would look something like this: ----------------------------------------- "When she is persecuted by a powerful Catholic?priest for being gay, a determined woman from El Salvador aRead more

    If your script has an antagonist. Someone who persecutes the couple for being gay, it should be added to the script.
    It would look something like this:
    —————————————–
    “When she is persecuted by a powerful Catholic?priest for being gay, a determined woman from El Salvador and her lover escape their country and risk a dangerous border crossing into America in the hopes of living free.”

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