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  1. Posted: December 27, 2018In: Horror

    Inspired by real events, an irreligious man tormented by supernatural disturbances in his newly-purchased home must seek help from unfamiliar sources when he learns he is dealing with the fiery spirits of Islamic lore?the Jinn.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 27, 2018 at 1:51 pm

    It seems that what sets the story in motion is discovering?his home is haunted by the Jinn; because that leads to his plan of action.-----------------------------------------------------"When his home is haunted by a jinn, an irreligious man must track down an Islamic?(Prophet?) who can help him takRead more

    It seems that what sets the story in motion is discovering?his home is haunted by the Jinn; because that leads to his plan of action.
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    “When his home is haunted by a jinn, an irreligious man must track down an Islamic?(Prophet?) who can help him take down the spirit and reclaim his home”

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  2. Posted: December 25, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a mysterious woman threatens to break everything he has strived for, Aldrin must either overcome their differences or the hopes and dreams of his people will die with him.

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    Added an answer on December 25, 2018 at 4:20 pm

    When the woman whose life he saved threatens his (Marriage? Job? Youtube channel?) a (High powered businessman?) Must... (Then tell us what he must do)

    When the woman whose life he saved threatens his (Marriage? Job? Youtube channel?) a (High powered businessman?) Must… (Then tell us what he must do)

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  3. Posted: December 25, 2018In: Fantasy

    When a mysterious woman threatens to break everything he has strived for, Aldrin must either overcome their differences or the hopes and dreams of his people will die with him.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 25, 2018 at 4:17 pm

    What has the lead character strived for? Since the antagonist wants to break everything the lead character has strived for, knowing what that is will give us the stakes. And telling the reader what's at stake will hook the reader. When a mysterious woman threatens his orphanage... When a mysteriousRead more

    What has the lead character strived for?

    Since the antagonist wants to break everything the lead character has strived for, knowing what that is will give us the stakes. And telling the reader what’s at stake will hook the reader.

    When a mysterious woman threatens his orphanage…
    When a mysterious woman threatens to take down his company…
    When a mysterious stripper threatens to derail his run for the presidency by exposing their one night stand…

    Vague is bad, so it is better to tell us what the stakes are so we can sympathize with the lead character.

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