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After an 18 year old teenager who was born and raised on a safe space colony on Mars visits the post-apocalyptic Earth for the first time, he needs to find out,where he really belongs ? with his family up on the Mars, or down here on the Earth.
You are missing what makes him want to stay on earth. That would be the inciting incident. If Mars is so wonderful and Earth is a post-apocalyptic?wasteland, then why would he even want to stay. What would set the story in motion would be the "Why" --------------------------------------- "When he faRead more
You are missing what makes him want to stay on earth. That would be the inciting incident.
If Mars is so wonderful and Earth is a post-apocalyptic?wasteland, then why would he even want to stay.
What would set the story in motion would be the “Why”
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“When he falls in love with an earth girl, a teen born and raised in a peaceful colony on Mars must…”
After being traumatised by domestic violence, a young teenage boy is taken on a therapy camping trip by his mother and sister to disrupt his paranoid thoughts about his father before he falls further into madness.
"After discovering her husband has been secretly abusing their son, a newly divorced mother takes her reluctant child and his sister on a therapeutic?camping trip?in order to help him overcome the ordeal."
“After discovering her husband has been secretly abusing their son, a newly divorced mother takes her reluctant child and his sister on a therapeutic?camping trip?in order to help him overcome the ordeal.”
See lessPart of the municipal park was deforested. The wild cat Mitzi, remaining orphaned with her brothers, has to leave her home destroyed by wood cutters. She reaches the Big Park Reservation (Rodnei Mountains National Park), where she finds shelter in the abandoned cottage of the forester. It’s Christmas Eve and the inhabitants of the Big Park are preparing for the celebration. Mitzi and her brothers are having trouble even here, being disturbed by the bad guys: Kit-Bandit and Max-Mask. They dress up in wolves in order to scare them away from the reservation. Their true identity is discovered by the wild cat Stripy and his friends. The scheme is foiled and to Mitzi and her brothers are offered a better life, proof that their guardian angel has not left them in trouble…
I? have to agree with Dkpough1. What is the lead character's goal? The lead character's home is destroyed so now their goal is...?
I? have to agree with Dkpough1. What is the lead character’s goal?
The lead character’s home is destroyed so now their goal is…?
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