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Based on true events, a lonesome Sheriff?s lieutenant takes a supernatural, spiritual journey while attempting to unravel a conspiracy involving unsolved murders and missing persons and, in the process, has his cynical worldview turned upside down.
Okay, I am going to give this another try, hopefully, this logline attempt is closer than my last one. ----------------------------------------------------------- "When his girlfriend (Love interest?) is ritually murdered, an atheist?sheriff is forced to team with the local preacher's daughter and tRead more
Okay, I am going to give this another try, hopefully, this logline attempt is closer than my last one.
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“When his girlfriend (Love interest?) is ritually murdered, an atheist?sheriff is forced to team with the local preacher’s daughter and the DEA, in order to follow the dark trail of a satanic syndicate, involved trafficking and human sacrifice.”
In Carella City, ageing can be postponed but not vanquished, until an exiled murderer helps a 157 year old woman evade her creator.
From what I am reading, what's missing are the stakes.It isn't coming across in your logline, nor in your brief synopsis?why living longer and aging slower is a bad thing.What makes aging naturally the correct choice and worth fighting for? What makes a slower aging process bad enough it is worth fiRead more
From what I am reading, what’s missing are the stakes.
It isn’t coming across in your logline, nor in your brief synopsis?why living longer and aging slower is a bad thing.
What makes aging naturally the correct choice and worth fighting for? What makes a slower aging process bad enough it is worth fighting against?
I only say this because aging naturally vs aging using nanotechnology seems to be the dramatic question of your story.
See lessIn Carella City, ageing can be postponed but not vanquished, until an exiled murderer helps a 157 year old woman evade her creator.
At what point does the reader know that the 157-year-old woman is the key to anti-aging?
At what point does the reader know that the 157-year-old woman is the key to anti-aging?
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