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When her orbital city of New Delhi is destroyed, a spirited Indian girl escapes to Freedom city determined to join the space force and take down the evil prophet of New Babylon, who?s responsible for the loss of everyone she loved.?
This is an idea I have been toying with. Seeing if it has legs.Sorry it's so long, but it is impossible to explain a future where there is a return to the city-state.? With giant orbital?space cities (orbiting the Sun,?not the Earth) and the massive war that will ensue, in just a few words.HopefullyRead more
This is an idea I have been toying with. Seeing if it has legs.
Sorry it’s so long, but it is impossible to explain a future where there is a return to the city-state.? With giant orbital?space cities (orbiting the Sun,?not the Earth) and the massive war that will ensue, in just a few words.
Hopefully, some of the bright people here can see the unnecessary?words so I can cut this down by about ten words.
Possible title: Star Epic
See lessLogline: A junior level cyber crimes investigator races against the clock to track down a sadistic online stalker before he strikes his next chosen victims, her family.
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock You say the lead character 'races against the clock' which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy. However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character onRead more
One more thing, saying there is a ticking clock is different than having a ticking clock
You say the lead character ‘races against the clock’ which is good, a well done ticking clock can give the story a certain immediacy.
However you should word it differently, you should say, the lead character only has ‘twenty-four hours’ (Or whatever the timeframe is in your story)
Telling us the specific amount of time instead of a more generic, ‘races against the clock’ will help the logline but without adding much to the word count.
See lessTwo recently graduated teens must hitchhike across the country in order to make the most out of their summer.
Ultimately this is a tough sort of story to write a logline for. This seems to be a coming of age movie that takes place 'on the road' normally in road trip movies, there is a goal or destination. Let me create a logline using something mandavirmias?mentioned. ---------------------------------------Read more
Ultimately this is a tough sort of story to write a logline for.
This seems to be a coming of age movie that takes place ‘on the road’
normally in road trip movies, there is a goal or destination.
Let me create a logline using something mandavirmias?mentioned.
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When his doctor tells him he only has one month to live, a recent grad and his best friend hitchhike across America determined to achieve his dream of seeing the Pacific ocean before he dies.
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Then set it in the 60’s when hitchhiking?was more common.