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A group of AP students must explore the balance between studying and partying in order to better understand the high school experience.
Where is the conflict, this sounds like a normal college experience.Also, you haven't given the reader a lead character.How about something like this, which has a lead character and conflict.-----------------------------------------------------"When he is accepted as an AP student a bullied teen vowRead more
Where is the conflict, this sounds like a normal college experience.
Also, you haven’t given the reader a lead character.
How about something like this, which has a lead character and conflict.
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“When he is accepted as an AP student a bullied teen vows to live out the normal college life, balancing partying and studying, but things go awry when he catches the ire of a fraternity and he must fight back or relive his high school nightmare.”??
An up and coming hacker uncovers a plot that will plunge the world into financial ruin, and must decide whether to stop it or save the girl he loves.
Why must the most important ingredient, Why must he choose?between saving the girl or saving the world? How do those two elements connect?
Why must the most important ingredient, Why must he choose?between saving the girl or saving the world?
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Logline: A junior level cyber crimes investigator races against the clock to track down a sadistic online stalker before he strikes his next chosen victims, her family.
Your logline is missing the stakes. If you are being stocked online. You simply block them. What specific bad thing will the online stalker do? What bad thing will happen if the lead character fails? Why can't they just block the stalker? What are the stakes?
Your logline is missing the stakes.
If you are being stocked online. You simply block them.
What specific bad thing will the online stalker do?
What bad thing will happen if the lead character fails?
Why can’t they just block the stalker?
What are the stakes?
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