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    Drawn to older men, an idealistic teenager starts dating an unmarried software engineer and is forced to choose between free will to love with her heart or obey societal norms to appease the locals.

    Richiev Singularity

    Choosing is not really a goal. Instead, you should have a specific person who is opposed to her new relationship, and the goal should be for the lead to win them over to her new relationship. Now at the end of the story the lead might have to make a choice, walk away from her relationship or walk awRead more

    Choosing is not really a goal.

    Instead, you should have a specific person who is opposed to her new relationship, and the goal should be for the lead to win them over to her new relationship.

    Now at the end of the story the lead might have to make a choice, walk away from her relationship or walk away from her family. But that shouldn’t be the goal. That should be what happens when she fails to reach her goal

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  2. Posted: October 12, 2018In:

    Violence is personal for this genetically engineered assassin when he is targeted by three major Syndicates for the death of his employer, a Syndicate patriarch, and must clear his name.

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    Richiev Singularity

    "When his syndicate boss is murdered, a genetically engineered assassin must clear his name before he is tracked and killed by three deadly assassins."---------------------------------------------Possible title: Death comes in threes?

    “When his syndicate boss is murdered, a genetically engineered assassin must clear his name before he is tracked and killed by three deadly assassins.”
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    Possible title: Death comes in threes?

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  3. Posted: October 12, 2018In:

    Orbiting a dead world rich with ancient history to find her people,a newly minted female admiral must convince a hard-nosed male security agent of her loyalties and allegiances after being discovered she descends from the bloodline of his people’s eternal enemy, a nearly extinct race of superhuman slavers.

    Richiev Singularity

    If the goal is to find her people, then what sets the story in motion should be when she misplaces them. Also,?Sinful and Evil are basically the same so you don't need to say both.

    If the goal is to find her people, then what sets the story in motion should be when she misplaces them.

    Also,?Sinful and Evil are basically the same so you don’t need to say both.

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