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Through interference with dimensional aliens, several lost Roman legions is transported to a brutal world of magics, monsters, and hellish creatures and must fight to reshape the world in the name of Caesar and Rome.
Having both aliens and magic might be a little much. Also, you haven't really given us a bad guy, as a result when they are transported to the magical world and their goal is to conquer it for Rome, that makes it seem like your lead characters are the bad guys. Normally in a story, you should want tRead more
Having both aliens and magic might be a little much.
Also, you haven’t really given us a bad guy, as a result when they are transported to the magical world and their goal is to conquer it for Rome, that makes it seem like your lead characters are the bad guys. Normally in a story, you should want the lead character to succeed not fail.
See lessA space marine on shore leave must race to rescue a scientist from enemy insurgents, or the scientist’s death or abduction could set off a doomsday weapon, killing billions.
I checked out the?NaNoWriMo website. A 50,000-word story in one month seems doable. (As long as you have the basic story outline?constructed in your head or on paper) That ends up being 4-5 pages a day. It is kind of like a New York Marathon for novel writing. Sounds like a fun challenge.
I checked out the?NaNoWriMo website. A 50,000-word story in one month seems doable. (As long as you have the basic story outline?constructed in your head or on paper) That ends up being 4-5 pages a day.
It is kind of like a New York Marathon for novel writing. Sounds like a fun challenge.
See lessWhen two siblings piece together the truth behind the ?Here be dragons? symbols on medieval maps, and learn of the possible existence of the last remaining dragon, powerful opposing forces converge in a see-sawing battle of wits, steel, meerkats, and witty repartee.
Perhaps strengthen?the inciting incident: "When they discover a strange map while touring an old English castle..."Also, you say, powerful forces, but that is vague, what powerful forces? it would be helpful to be specific.---------------------------------------------------"When they discover a straRead more
Perhaps strengthen?the inciting incident: “When they discover a strange map while touring an old English castle…”
See lessAlso, you say, powerful forces, but that is vague, what powerful forces? it would be helpful to be specific.
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“When they discover a strange codex while touring an?old English castle, two siblings begin following the trail of the dragon marker shown on? the map within its pages, all while using their wits to outsmart a group of bubbling Knights Templar who wants the book for themselves.”