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Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius ?Daggy? Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.
Your logline focuses on the setup of the story and not the story itself. What happens when the lead characters love interest is sentenced to die? What must he do to save her??What specific action?
Your logline focuses on the setup of the story and not the story itself.
What happens when the lead characters love interest is sentenced to die?
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When he falls in love with a writer and her amazing script, a con-artist poses as a producer while avoiding the people he swindled to turn the script into a film that will make more than any of his scams.
btw, this logline isn't far off, I wouldn't make too many changes just small little tweaks. You should get good advice but if you follow all the advise it may actually muddy things a bit.
btw, this logline isn’t far off, I wouldn’t make too many changes just small little tweaks. You should get good advice but if you follow all the advise it may actually muddy things a bit.
See lessWhen he falls in love with a writer and her amazing script, a con-artist poses as a producer while avoiding the people he swindled to turn the script into a film that will make more than any of his scams.
I like the premise. I would change the end of the logline though. If he falls in love, the overall goal should not be to make more money than his previous scams. Maybe his goal should be to prove that he has changed his ways. That he is not the scam artist he used to be. "When he falls for a brilliaRead more
I like the premise.
I would change the end of the logline though. If he falls in love, the overall goal should not be to make more money than his previous scams.
Maybe his goal should be to prove that he has changed his ways. That he is not the scam artist he used to be.
“When he falls for a brilliant scriptwriter, a notorious con man poses as a producer to get her film made while attempting to outsmart a former mark out to prove to the writer that the con artist is running a scam”
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