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Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.
Also, you should write a little more decisively?for the purpose of the logline Instead of: Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity This: When his company loses popularity Losing popularity is far more compelling than the possibility of losing popularity.
Also, you should write a little more decisively?for the purpose of the logline
Instead of: Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity
This: When his company loses popularity
Losing popularity is far more compelling than the possibility of losing popularity.
See lessRealizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.
I am confused by the term, 'losing unpopularity' If you lose unpopularity, that would make you popular, I would think popularity would be a good thing, so I can only assume you mean something else.
I am confused by the term, ‘losing unpopularity’
See lessIf you lose unpopularity, that would make you popular, I would think popularity would be a good thing, so I can only assume you mean something else.
When an arcane creature disembowels several Asian women in 1900s San Francisco, a war-weary army officer must team with a disparate group of social outcasts to expose the corrupt city leaders behind the monster?s bloodbath.
dpg makes a good point, However, if you wish to keep the 'uncovering the corruption' as the goal then you need to add that to the beginning of the logline so the inciting incident and the goal match. "When a corrupt city council unleashes a violent arcane beast on the population of 19th century SanRead more
dpg makes a good point, However, if you wish to keep the ‘uncovering the corruption’ as the goal then you need to add that to the beginning of the logline so the inciting incident and the goal match.
“When a corrupt city council unleashes a violent arcane beast on the population of 19th century San Francisco…”
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