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  1. Posted: January 24, 2018In: Drama

    Fueled by a childhood experience with a haunted house, a passionate paranormal believer and her lifelong best friend use their extensive knowledge of scary movies to help clients solve their own paranormal problems.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 24, 2018 at 8:40 am

    You shouldn't use backstory as your inciting incident. It is not immediate enough.Think about Supernatural, the two brothers have a backstory that's important to the overall story, but it is the immediate supernatural murder of the girlfriend that sets the story in motion. Also, they have a specificRead more

    You shouldn’t use backstory as your inciting incident. It is not immediate enough.

    Think about Supernatural, the two brothers have a backstory that’s important to the overall story, but it is the immediate supernatural murder of the girlfriend that sets the story in motion.
    Also, they have a specific goal; find their father.

    So what is the immediate incident that sets the story in motion?
    What’s the lead characters specific goal; as set into motion by the inciting incident?

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2018In: Drama

    Retired gangster find the truth behind human-like female snatcher inside of a film story world.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 24, 2018 at 6:21 am

    BTW, are you talking about the lead character entering into an actual film world, like in 'Last actin Hero' or is the 'female snatcher' recreating scenes from movies when it attacks the women?

    BTW, are you talking about the lead character entering into an actual film world, like in ‘Last actin Hero’ or is the ‘female snatcher’ recreating scenes from movies when it attacks the women?

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2018In: Drama

    Retired gangster find the truth behind human-like female snatcher inside of a film story world.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 24, 2018 at 6:14 am

    Why him? What set's this story in motion?

    Why him? What set’s this story in motion?

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