1. Posted: November 9, 2017In:

    When an alien hunts a woman, she must stop the alien and save the ones captured by him.

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    Richiev Singularity

    A few specifics would help us visualize the story. Here would be an example of adding a few specifics. ------------------------------------- "When a struggling professional wrestler is hunted by a flesh eating Alien, she must use her body slamming skills to defeat the alien and release the townsfolkRead more

    A few specifics would help us visualize the story. Here would be an example of adding a few specifics.
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    “When a struggling professional wrestler is hunted by a flesh eating Alien, she must use her body slamming skills to defeat the alien and release the townsfolk held captive by the creature.”

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2017In:

    When a genie in a pill bottle grants him his wish to be an action hero, a meek civil servant suffering from high anxiety must survive his mundane day job that magically transformed into a series of spectacular action sequences.

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    Richiev Singularity

    lol, what if it turns out it was just the pills all along, there was no genie...

    lol, what if it turns out it was just the pills all along, there was no genie…

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  3. Posted: November 7, 2017In:

    A British Major and aristocrat must team up with a vulgar guerilla leader in order to blow up a bridge in Nazi occupied Greece. Based on a true story.

    Richiev Singularity

    If you tell us they 'must' blow up the bridge, you might want to tell us why (Briefly)? Are the Germans planning an offensive? Is the bridge being used to resupply the army? There should be an immediacy; a dire situation where If they don't blow up the bridge within X amount of time (This bad thingRead more

    If you tell us they ‘must’ blow up the bridge, you might want to tell us why (Briefly)? Are the Germans planning an offensive? Is the bridge being used to resupply the army? There should be an immediacy; a dire situation where If they don’t blow up the bridge within X amount of time (This bad thing will happen)

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