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  1. Posted: November 4, 2017In: Drama

    A womanizer music mogul, finds himself wrapped up in a sexual abuse scandal after finding true love with a beautiful singer who shapes him into a better man.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 5, 2017 at 8:49 am

    This is more of a situation, The story would be what the lead does about the allegations.

    This is more of a situation, The story would be what the lead does about the allegations.

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  2. Posted: November 4, 2017In: Drama

    When terrorists kill the best friend of Elliot Ross, a troubled Yeshiva-grad, he must decide between building a future with the girl of his dreams, or seeking out revenge on those he deems responsible, even if it means losing it all.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 4, 2017 at 9:41 am

    The way your logline is written, the story seems to revolve around whether or not the lead should get revenge. I am not sure if viewers want to sit through 2 hours of a lead character choosing whether or not to take action.You should just make the story about the lead actually getting revenge insteaRead more

    The way your logline is written, the story seems to revolve around whether or not the lead should get revenge.
    I am not sure if viewers want to sit through 2 hours of a lead character choosing whether or not to take action.

    You should just make the story about the lead actually getting revenge instead of having a story about a lead character deciding whether or not to get revenge.
    That way the lead character will be more pro-active.

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  3. Posted: November 3, 2017In: Comedy

    In order to impress his friends at a backyard campout, a young boy and his father struggle to avoid corny horror tropes as they narrate and develop the scariest camp fire story of all time.

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    Added an answer on November 3, 2017 at 1:21 pm

    I am not sure what the stakes are. Is there a reason he must impress his friends?

    I am not sure what the stakes are. Is there a reason he must impress his friends?

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