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When she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.
In some ways ?you ?have painted yourself in a corner, it sounds like in your story, the data dump into the leads head is the "Big Reveal" Your lead thinks they are carrying a regular package but the the actual package is stored as data in her head. 1: As a rule of thumb you don't give away the big rRead more
In some ways ?you ?have painted yourself in a corner, it sounds like in your story, the data dump into the leads head is the “Big Reveal”
Your lead thinks they are carrying a regular package but the the actual package is stored as data in her head.
1: As a rule of thumb you don’t give away the big reveal in a logline
2: But it sounds as if your big reveal is the hook of the story so it is essential to the logline
Sort of a literary catch-22
See lessWhen she is targeted by a rival tech firm for software code in her head, a closed off data courier with a photographic memory must finish her latest delivery to survive. Only problem: For some reason, she can’t remember ever accepting the job.
sounds like?Johnny Mnemonic, is there anything that sets it apart?
sounds like?Johnny Mnemonic, is there anything that sets it apart?
See lessA by the book detective puts his career in jeopardy when he allows an unorthodox priest to punish a recently apprehended serial killer. (23)
I would help if you personalize the story, after all, if the detective is 'by the book" why would he allow the serial killer to be punished? However we could understand the detectives motivation better if the serial killer killed someone close to the detective. Now we would understand why the changeRead more
I would help if you personalize the story, after all, if the detective is ‘by the book” why would he allow the serial killer to be punished?
However we could understand the detectives motivation better if the serial killer killed someone close to the detective.
Now we would understand why the change in character of the lead from ‘by the book’ to ‘vigilante cop’
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