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A 45 year old homemaker finds herself on the verge of an ugly divorce. With her estranged relationships and a broken heart, she tumbles further down when is left bereft of an alimony. To leave behind rock bottom, she must discover herself and start a new life.
You spent about 40 words on set-up Then when you write what the lead ?must do about these events you say she must, discover herself which is way to vague.Give us a specific event, then tell us what the lead must do about it in a tangible way.
You spent about 40 words on set-up
Then when you write what the lead ?must do about these events you say she must, discover herself which is way to vague.
Give us a specific event, then tell us what the lead must do about it in a tangible way.
See lessWhen he sees the teacher who sexually assaulted him as a child, a young executive’s memories of years of abuse flood back and he embarks on a mission to protect other boys, only to discover what he really seeks is to avenge his abused friend?s suicide.
I agree with what the others are saying. From a practical logline standpoint. Your character has way too many goals in the logline. They can be in the story but the logline should be focused.
I agree with what the others are saying.
From a practical logline standpoint. Your character has way too many goals in the logline. They can be in the story but the logline should be focused.
See lessTrapped in an isolated mansion by paranormal forces from the dark world of Irish mythology, an estate appraiser and her team face death as they struggle to unravel a gruesome, long-buried secret.
I believe a lot of the elements of the story are there, you simply take too long to get there."When they are trapped by an evil spirit, an estate appraiser and her team have just one night to discover the poltergeist's secret or die."
I believe a lot of the elements of the story are there, you simply take too long to get there.
“When they are trapped by an evil spirit, an estate appraiser and her team have just one night to discover the poltergeist’s secret or die.”
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