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When two wholesome brothers inherit a strip club they must not only overcome their own prejudices to see it succeed, but also defend it when the upright community decides to drive it out of business
btw, I do think this is a good premise, I just think the logline needs that one extra thing mentioned above.
btw, I do think this is a good premise, I just think the logline needs that one extra thing mentioned above.
See lessAfter she causes the death of her younger brother, a teenager discovers a past-altering device and must use it to regain her family before her brother?s ghost ruins her life.
As a rule you should only ask the audience to suspend disbelief over one really big thing. You have time travel, science and a ghost, spirit. I believe the time travel makes for a good enough hook that you don't need the ghost. (If you want to up the stakes, make it so the the time device only givesRead more
As a rule you should only ask the audience to suspend disbelief over one really big thing. You have time travel, science and a ghost, spirit. I believe the time travel makes for a good enough hook that you don’t need the ghost.
(If you want to up the stakes, make it so the the time device only gives her one chance to save her brother and if she fails she can never go back again)
See lessWhen his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.
I am not sure what 'complete the Playground' means, is it a new term kids are using?
I am not sure what ‘complete the Playground’ means, is it a new term kids are using?
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