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  1. Posted: March 17, 2017In: Comedy

    When her traditional father sets an impossible ultimatum a week before her wedding, a Nigerian-American and her Latina best friend must travel to Australia to achieve it without destroying their friendship.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 18, 2017 at 4:36 am

    I agree with dpg, Since the ultimatum sets up the story, We should know what it is. Also I find it interesting that a traditional Nigerian father would want his daughter to travel halfway around the world away from the 'groom' That does not sound very traditional.

    I agree with dpg, Since the ultimatum sets up the story, We should know what it is.

    Also I find it interesting that a traditional Nigerian father would want his daughter to travel halfway around the world away from the ‘groom’ That does not sound very traditional.

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  2. Posted: March 18, 2017In: Action

    A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 18, 2017 at 4:32 am

    As for dpg's comments, I agree with him completely. I believe the obvious goal for the Hit-Woman character would be for her to discover who killed (Or caused to die) her sister and take them out. (All the while fixing school lunches and attending PTA meetings)

    As for dpg’s comments, I agree with him completely. I believe the obvious goal for the Hit-Woman character would be for her to discover who killed (Or caused to die) her sister and take them out. (All the while fixing school lunches and attending PTA meetings)

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  3. Posted: March 18, 2017In: Action

    A cash strapped hit-woman, must confront the demons of her past, while juggling the bone crunching world of professional hits and the guardianship of her deceased sisters kids.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 18, 2017 at 4:29 am

    It is not clear from your logline if the lead was a hit-woman before these events, or the events causes her to become a hit-woman. In other words is this like the show Weeds, where an ordinary woman who is strapped for cash turns to an Illegal activity? Or is a story about a Hit-Woman whose life itRead more

    It is not clear from your logline if the lead was a hit-woman before these events, or the events causes her to become a hit-woman.

    In other words is this like the show Weeds, where an ordinary woman who is strapped for cash turns to an Illegal activity?
    Or is a story about a Hit-Woman whose life it turned upside down when her sister dies and she must assume custody of the Children?

    Just curious because that will affect how the logline is written.

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