Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A group of mischievous high school seniors during detention at the library find themselves trapped in with a vengeful librarian and must survive the whole night or die trying.
A twisted Breakfast club, interesting idea. Just curious, is there a specific lead character?
A twisted Breakfast club, interesting idea.
Just curious, is there a specific lead character?
See lessA wannabe prep girl moves to a new Washington Town far away from home, and will do anything it takes to make it to the top of the social food chain, including murder.
I think you are missing the hook. ?The logline needs that one extra thing to grab the reader.
I think you are missing the hook. ?The logline needs that one extra thing to grab the reader.
See lessA time-traveling Jewish scientist goes back to 1891 to smother Hitler in his crib, only to return to the future to find out a different Fuhrer was able to win the war, making Europe a permanently enslaved continent and the U.S. its fascist ally. Now he has to return to the past, and kill himself before he can kill Hitler.
Your story seems interesting, However when framing the logline it helps if there is only one inciting incident. ---------------------------------- When his plan to kill Hitler creates an even worse future, A desperate scientist must go back in time to kill himself before he kills Hitler in the crib.
Your story seems interesting, However when framing the logline it helps if there is only one inciting incident.
See less———————————-
When his plan to kill Hitler creates an even worse future, A desperate scientist must go back in time to kill himself before he kills Hitler in the crib.