1. Posted: January 23, 2017In:

    When deep brain trauma escalates a literary gifted teens perception of recovery to a pain crippling head he creatively channels the aid of a science fictional character to restore his identity a locked coma

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    Confusing I believe the first step in helping this logline would be to give the character a goal, what is the character actively trying to achieve through his actions?

    Confusing

    I believe the first step in helping this logline would be to give the character a goal, what is the character actively trying to achieve through his actions?

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  2. Posted: January 22, 2017In:

    An Ex Military specialist is called in one last time to recover deadly military experiment (PHOBE)who has escaped. Tracking this PHOBE to a small planet called Earth, Dapp must stop the Phobe and destroy the egg within 72 hours.

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    "When a deadly military bio experiment escapes to earth, a retired galactic specialist has 72 hours to destroy it before it lays it's eggs and infests the primitive planet."

    “When a deadly military bio experiment escapes to earth, a retired galactic specialist has 72 hours to destroy it before it lays it’s eggs and infests the primitive planet.”

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  3. Posted: January 21, 2017In:

    A socially withdrawn girl creates a fantasy world while riding on the bus and falls in love with the boy who sits across from her, but he takes her places in her head she doesn?t want to face.

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    What's at stake? You have a girl on a bus day dreaming but is there any possible consequences that could happen? If so I would add it to the logline.

    What’s at stake? You have a girl on a bus day dreaming but is there any possible consequences that could happen? If so I would add it to the logline.

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